Wednesday, December 15, 2021

Artemis: A Review

By Campbell Walker 

Once again, Andy Weir is here to put fingers to keys and transport a reader into a plausible, grounded, and endlessly entertaining thrill-ride of a narrative. Having read his latest novel, Project Hail Merry, as well as his debut, The Martian, I can say Artemis fits perfectly in the gap between those stories. 

We find our protagonist, Jazz Bashara, in the lunar city of Artemis, secretly smuggling illicit goods to wealthy occupants as a side hustle. What seems to be crime-noir eventually morphs into espionage and eventually heroism.

 Jazz is an extremely likeable character, consistently poking fun at the situations presented and outsmarting those that obstruct her goals. A character such as Jazz has the potential to come off as uptight or pretentious, but Weir adeptly swerves around that common mistake with humor and relatability. She’s capable, yet still retains that emotional wiggle room that makes the more heartfelt scenes connect with the reader. Her choices throughout the novel, whilst occasionally chaotic, have genuine thought behind them, accompanied by the hard science that Weir excels at. The perspective in which the novel is told is also fitting, with Jazz occasionally breaking the fourth wall and attempting to guess what the reader may be thinking. It’s the combination of these elements that makes for a suitably excellent protagonist, and I’d expect no less from an author who seems to thrive with character building.

The central narrative of Artemis is an interweaving one, with many plot threads and subtle notes to hang onto. When the story begins, you get the necessary exposition you need, then are thrown into the city to experience its protectors, administrators, commoners, and delinquents. Without spoiling much, Jazz slowly unravels a conspiracy that gets continuously more interesting and inventive the more you read, culminating in a thrill-ride of a third act. Roughly half way through the novel you reach a point where it becomes difficult to put down, the page number rising despite what seems like mere minutes passing. It holds your attention with in-depth and intricately written scientific detail whilst steering you along its tracks. Weir seems to excel at this structure, never missing a beat even in the more relaxed and quiet moments.

Setting-wise, Artemis is rich with character. Throughout the novel, you’re introduced to its districts, shops, cultures, activities, operations, procedures, and technology. It all feels extremely real, nothing stands out as a red flag or potential plot hole. It’s clear the Weir spent a considerable amount of time concepting the city, and it sure shows. Every aspect is meticulously constructed, and the people, the people feel effortlessly tangible with motivations, goals, and unique personalities. Weir also consistently reminds the reader of lunar gravity and its effects on practically everything, as well as the complex pressure system that keeps the occupants living. Never once did I feel I had to stretch my definition of reality to fit the environment, the places depicted simply come to life in your head even with minimal detail.

In closing, and wow, did I not want to close this book. Weir’s done it once more. Artemis seamlessly and effortlessly blends science and a fast moving narrative into a singular cohesive package, and it just works.

Thursday, December 9, 2021

The Blur

My days are made up of hurry,

busy, rush, and worry.

Life is living me, and

I dream of being free.

Free of fast and tracking time,

free of working for a dime.

Hustle, bustle, go, go, go,

taking time, I do not know.

Days, weeks, months flee quickly by,

no matter how hard that I try,

to savor each and every bit,

more and more, I cannot fit.

I dream of days, slow and calm,

ones without a single qualm.

Love and kindness fill the air,

patient, tender, always fair.

Holding hands, we will explore,

the world, it offers so much more.

Splendor, fun, and learning too,

limitless things that we could do.

More time with loved ones we would share,

soaking in the moments with special care.

This life I dream, may not be,

achieved until eternity.

- Michelle Penland

Wednesday, December 8, 2021

The Absolutely True Diary: A Review

By Tedros Cartwright

"The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian" was written by Sherman Alexie and published by Little, Brown, and Company in 2007. I first noticed the two drawings on the cover which leads me to expect more drawings in the actual book. I see this as a sign of a creative writer appealing to my liking for drawing.

To sum the book up, it starts off with an Indian boy who grows up on a reservation overcrowded with other Indians. The protagonist is Arnold who is born with “water on the brain.” He ends up going to an all-white school where he gains new experiences and develops a whole new perspective to life. He finds some kind of love, gets bullied and overcomes it, etc. The classic new kid at school hook. At the end of it all, he manages to fit in even though everyone knows where he comes from and his living situation and makes some really good unexpected friendships. Arnold’s family consists of his mother, father, grandma, and sister who leaves the family to get married after Arnold leaves the rest to go to an all white school. It is as if she is trying to one up him. They are generally poor but manage to get by. ”

Despite having health conditions, Arthur goes throughout the book without experiencing too many life-threatening situations. He has a best friend called Rowdy who is the polar opposite of him. He is athletic, dumb and rough. Despite their differences they get along until Arnold switches schools. They end up fighting for most of the book and go against each other during basketball. Arnold manages to overcome Rowdy and beat him in basketball during the final high school game. He is upset at first but they manage to make up. This book reminds me of the series "Diary of a Wimpy Kid," which I would recommend.

I have read my fair share of first-person books so I can point out what I think is valid and not. What makes this a decent book to me is that it allows me to understand a story from another person's point-of-view. One thing that I find disappointing throughout the novel is the amount of unexplored opportunities for a juicier plot. All in all, I would not recommend this book to a first-time reader as I feel that it would be a bad example of first-person books. However, I do enjoy it and would read the book again. I can now say after reading this book that I know what it’s like to be a “part-time Indian.”

Tuesday, December 7, 2021

One of Us Is Lying: A Review

    In a high school murder mystery, someone dies during detention and everyone starts to blame

the others.

    One Of Us Is Lying by Karen McManus is a book about high schoolers who are in the sight of a murder that

happened during their detention. The book has a great suspense build when the reader is trying

to figure out who the killer is. Although the student killed, died from a peanut allergy, the police

believe foul play was involved. The other four are all hiding something they don’t what others to

know, this is slowly revealed over the period of the book. The middle of the book is a slow

suspense-building part, I feel as most people would have stopped reading during this time

because it is a little too slow, but is like climbing over a roller coaster, a slow start but a quick

ride down. The ending of the book really caught me off guard as I wasn’t expecting it at all, an

amazing plot twist that made me gasp. Overall, this book is worth reading, if you’re really

interested in this genre you could knock it out within in a week.

-Alexis Sharp

Thursday, December 2, 2021

JHHS students write more than 700,000 words in November challenge

 


Penelope Loy wrote 31,325 words 
during the November National Write a Novel Month challenge.
Abi Moore wrote 15,546 words.
Tiffany Huang wrote 11,895.
Nicholas Machado wrote 11,111.
Silvana Bislimi wrote 8,953.
Michael Howard wrote 4,528.
If you see these top writers, give them a high-five!
 And congratulations to all 126 students who participated in National Write a Novel Month.